Navel Tales

By Masala Podi

Chapter 1

Prank Gone Wrong

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To be Continued…

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Masala Podi

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16 comments

  1. maverick.education93

    Too costly

    1. Masalapodi

      I understand that the story did not meet your expectations. I am very grateful for your investment in my work. To help me improve, could you please provide some feedback on what aspects of the story you felt were overpriced? If you can be more specific about the issues, I will make every effort to address them in the upcoming chapters.

    2. Chinmaya ojha

      Nice work… Btw when you going to share the part 2 of this story?

    3. Masalapodi

      It would take a while
      Given that people are expecting more
      It’ll be notified on my socials and timely updates and teasers will be dropped there

  2. Riya Ghosh

    Not worth the money

    1. Masalapodi

      I’m sorry that it didn’t meet your expectations.
      I’ll comeback with a stronger story. I hope that you’ll like it and keep supporting my work.

  3. Omphalian King

    Excellent art work man. Hats off for your efforts.🫡Just one request from my side though. Please add more navel play centric frames in future stories. The navel scenes felt too short in this. That is my only complaint. But excellent start. Looking forward for more stories from you.

    1. Masalapodi

      Thanks for your feedback, I appreciate it.
      Yes, I’m aware that this story doesn’t have many Navel-centric scenes, but this is just the beginning.
      I promise all the readers that the second installment in this series will be a banger! You’ll get to see something that’s never been executed in any of the stories on navelworld so far. And I really thank everyone for their support.

  4. dapun123.rr

    The story has a lot of potential, but the navel scenes were a bit less but overall good

    1. Masalapodi

      Thank you for your valuable feedback. Will improve next time 😃

  5. Monkey D Luffy

    The plot was good and had a lot of potential, but the issue here is there were not enough navel play slides. For example you could have added that the guy poked her navel with a toothpick and much more innovative/creative ways to exploit her navel. And also make sure to add the reactions from the lady because that is also important

    1. Masalapodi

      I’ll make sure to add more navel scenes in the next story
      I hope you would like it and keep supporting my work

  6. MeaCulpa

    good effort!

    1. Masalapodi

      🙏thank you

  7. Hshsh Nahsj

    U can add more close up pics of navel licking and extend the scenes. Post soon btw

    1. Masalapodi

      Noted