A Cigar’s Worth of Clarity
Shalu’s mind was a chaotic storm as she busied herself in the kitchen, her hands moving on autopilot as she chopped vegetables for lunch. The morning had been painfully uneventful. Breakfast had passed without incident—no tension, no awkward glances, just normalcy. And yet, that very normalcy was what unsettled her the most.
Vasundar was talking to her like he always had. Casual. Friendly. Familiar. But that was it.
Where was the Vasundar from last evening? The man whose smoldering gaze had sent shivers down her spine, who had touched her like she was something precious, something irresistible? The man who had made her feel like the most desired woman in the world?
Gone.
And she knew exactly when he had disappeared.
Navneet.
The name alone gnawed at her.
Vasundar was pretending like nothing had changed, but she could see through him. He was unsettled, disturbed, masking it behind his usual…
Very well written buddy. Exceptional in taking the story forward, although I would have liked this episode more if it was between just Vasundar and Shalini but having Navneet’s confession and apology also has its satisfaction. Please post the next episode soon.
Thanks bro. Navneet is very important to this story for the bigger picture. You will see it down the road.
yoo bro you know what just find a director already and start working for making a movie out of this, this is not where this story deserves to be. time to hit the screens hehe
When will the next chapter of hidden pulse will be released
😂😂if i got a producer i may direct this shit myself
Hope you’ll write the next chapter very soon before I turn into an alviniophiliac version of Liam Neeson from Taken.
I hope in the next chapter Shalu better be on the edge from start to finish with multiple involuntary forced orgasms from Vasundar stamping his mark on her decisively without any physical or mental means to stop or quit. I don’t mind if Vansudar’s fingers doing a bit extra mile down from the navel along with the usual stuff.
Btw is there any email or any other means of contacting you to give suggestions?
😂😂 Don’t worry. Next chapter won’t be long. I am already working on it. You can expect it within a few days and will try my best to blow ur mind haha 😂😂 Also I am in insta and fb under the same name if u wanna pm
I don’t use both are you active on deviantart?
No bro. I do have an account. But hasn’t opened it in ages.
Bro, have you stopped writing on amy and Akki after the piercing chapter. I am a fan of their navel mischief. Please write on them too.
Really? I thought nobody cared about that dynamic. So stopped paying it much attention lately. I will do something for them down the line.