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The End
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A much needed release for Kesav. And after reading the post credits I’m still strong with the hopes lol.
haha thanks bro
Nice ending! Kesav and Archana’s emotions are very well captured. If you think a sequel might be time consuming, please make a prequel like how Kesav and Archana discovered the allure of Archana’s NAVEL in the early days of their marriage like the reaction Archana’s NAVEL received during inadvertent slips in public places like in Kesav’s restaurant(how customers enjoy it like a feast and just drop in to get a glimpse), during Archana’s dance events (how the organisers tease her in the dressing room and demand her to flaunt her NAVEL to bring in more audiance and make more money) their apartment or neighborhood, a wedding function, a family or friends get together. Please capture the public’s reaction and the conversation they try to make with Kesav and Archana regarding her NAVEL. And how hyper shy Archana and what a tease Kesav would be and then regret for making her flaunt her NAVEL when the situation gets out of control. In case if you wish to continue, please consider this. Thank you again for the long awaited mesmerizing Navelicious series.
I actually love that idea now that I think about it. A prequel does have a lot of potential. Dance, restaurant… lots of things that can be played around that theme. I think I might attempt this